Very neat idea.

Do you have a non-flash version also?

Im sorry man i haven´t !
Thanks for your comment!!
I decide to follow the advice of you guys! Specially about the composition....(Thanks tieenbietjes and Diane )

Well as I said I want to learn and improve every time!! I found tons of stuff about composition ! I like that!!
One phrase in this tutorial I found was this one ! I think is hard but
its totally true!

" ...In our modern world of automatic cameras, which focus for us and adjust the exposure in an ever more perfect way (most of the time), the biggest difference between a good photograph and a mediocre one is the compositon...."

Source:
http://photoinf.com/General/Geoff_Lawrence/Composition.html

Ahahah Man, that's a great idea! Too bad that you've used the flash, it would have been a perfect picture! Nice one anyways, the concept is just crazy!
+9
And btw, you're welcome about the advises (I love them too, it's the best way to learn!)

Nice work! Nice composition and frame
My only crit would be that the white line implicates that the horizon (which is vertical in this case) seems tilted..

Keep experimenting!

i just don't like the way you used the flash... well i never use my flash, because i have always problems of overbrightness... but i love the idea and as i love differents ways of transmiting ideas... great...

Hugo Zenha

i like the idea of this, its a striking shot - i agree with earlier posts tho, the execution could be improved. With these kinds of shots, where you want to illuminate the foreground gently its best to use a diffuser. If, like me, you dont have access to one just lightly sellotape a bit of tissue paper in front of the flash and it should soften the light.. i carry around two different coluors of tissues when i'm taking photos

great concept!
and funny too.

Nice and funny idea!!
Carlos

Great idea... a bad u used a flash.
well done.